Comments on: Book LOL of the Day: The Exorsistah http://www.godlessgirl.com/2009/05/book-lol-of-the-day-the-exorsistah/ ... and her adventures in Atheism Sat, 31 Jul 2010 00:46:58 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0.1 By: godlessgirl http://www.godlessgirl.com/2009/05/book-lol-of-the-day-the-exorsistah/comment-page-1/#comment-190 godlessgirl Sat, 23 May 2009 00:54:26 +0000 http://www.godlessgirl.com/?p=156#comment-190 Oh I'm looking forward to seeing quotes from that! Send it along! And I'm glad you haven't had to give proper feedback yet ;) Oh I'm looking forward to seeing quotes from that! Send it along! And I'm glad you haven't had to give proper feedback yet ;)

]]> By: godlessgirl http://www.godlessgirl.com/2009/05/book-lol-of-the-day-the-exorsistah/comment-page-1/#comment-189 godlessgirl Sat, 23 May 2009 00:53:20 +0000 http://www.godlessgirl.com/?p=156#comment-189 I'm sure it gets better... like maybe at the very end? Maybe if another demon shows up? ... Maybe? I like your writing style already. Your attitude and purpose come out easily, and you're able to form a complete picture in a short essay. You should read some of the junk I wrote in college when I studied creative writing (I shouldn't mention that, since it brings expectations that I might actually be able to construct a sentence). Most of my stories and essays were riddled with adjectives, mixed metaphors, and pictoral language that would make your teeth grind. Ah well! Live and learn. I'm sure it gets better… like maybe at the very end? Maybe if another demon shows up? … Maybe?

I like your writing style already. Your attitude and purpose come out easily, and you're able to form a complete picture in a short essay.

You should read some of the junk I wrote in college when I studied creative writing (I shouldn't mention that, since it brings expectations that I might actually be able to construct a sentence). Most of my stories and essays were riddled with adjectives, mixed metaphors, and pictoral language that would make your teeth grind. Ah well! Live and learn.

]]> By: Gregory http://www.godlessgirl.com/2009/05/book-lol-of-the-day-the-exorsistah/comment-page-1/#comment-187 Gregory Fri, 22 May 2009 22:30:02 +0000 http://www.godlessgirl.com/?p=156#comment-187 Oh me oh my. I think it's the shoots and dangs that got me. Or maybe it was the similes. My eyes are bleeding... Someday, I swear, I'm going to share the terror that is Lucifer's Experiment. Self-published. New Age. Oh, so very New Age. And the writing makes this stuff you quoted read like frellin' Shakespeare. And it was handed to me by the author. Lucky for me, I've never seen her again, because man, that would be one awkward conversation. Oh me oh my. I think it's the shoots and dangs that got me. Or maybe it was the similes. My eyes are bleeding…

Someday, I swear, I'm going to share the terror that is Lucifer's Experiment. Self-published. New Age. Oh, so very New Age. And the writing makes this stuff you quoted read like frellin' Shakespeare.

And it was handed to me by the author. Lucky for me, I've never seen her again, because man, that would be one awkward conversation.

]]> By: Dusty Smith http://www.godlessgirl.com/2009/05/book-lol-of-the-day-the-exorsistah/comment-page-1/#comment-186 Dusty Smith Fri, 22 May 2009 21:48:04 +0000 http://www.godlessgirl.com/?p=156#comment-186 Surely you must be making this up? That dialogue is so embarrassing its hard to believe it can be real. But i guess nothing surprises me anymore. I wrote a book in my early 20's, which I now think sucks ass, but it is a literary masterpiece compared to that drivel. So thanks for making me feel better about my own writing skills. Your's aren't so bad either =) Surely you must be making this up? That dialogue is so embarrassing its hard to believe it can be real. But i guess nothing surprises me anymore. I wrote a book in my early 20's, which I now think sucks ass, but it is a literary masterpiece compared to that drivel.

So thanks for making me feel better about my own writing skills. Your's aren't so bad either =)

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